PMD: Monochrome Crusaders Prologue [Page 2]

Uhmm... hi, I have a little suggestion. I think it might be better to minimize the white sludge under the words there, unless you plan on giving them a fading effect like smoke or mist. Or you could remove the excess white and just make a small white border around each letter to make it look neater and still make your text visible. But this is just a suggestion
It's up to you if you want to change it or not. Cool intro so far C: